Showing posts with label fiction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label fiction. Show all posts

Adventure at the Library - no, really!

Today, I want to write for the fun of it! I won't worry about the writing rules. I'm just going to start writing and see where the words take me. An adventure awaits - new worlds, new characters, new discoveries. It will be a fantastical, rollicking good time - a journey of amazement. I'll be hanging out at the Glendale Library if anyone wants to join me. Wish Me Bon Voyage!

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I begin my journey at the library. I haven’t been here in a long time and I had forgotten how much I enjoy being surrounded by thousands of books – each one boasting of adventure within their covers. Places I have yet to visit, people I have yet to meet, stories I have yet to step into.

Around me, people quietly peruse the rows of books or sit silently hunched over their keyboards, while a cacophonous din of voices call to me from between the covers of surrounding books. Whether it is the voices of the authors or the characters they've created, I cannot tell. All are clamoring for my attention. And then, one rises above the rest. Not in volume, but in mysterious seduction. A whisper, really - enticing me toward row 37 of the fiction section. ERD-FOE says the label at the end of the aisle. I feel myself being pulled toward something. I know not what, but I cannot resist. I recall a quote by John Muir, “And into the forest I go, to lose my mind and find my soul.” Yes, a forest of long-ago felled trees that have been transformed by imagination and story, yet they still retain the magic and mystery of the forest. 

And into the forest I go. Past Fleming and Fitzgerald, Fielding and Fitch, past Bridget Jones and Fanny Flag, deep in conversation. I long to eavesdrop, but the voice calls me onward. A faint glow draws me deeper into the wood. The path grows dim and narrow. Underbrush snags at my legs. The canopy above weaves its branches together and blocks out all but sporadic flickers of light.

The greenish glow intensifies as does the voice, now raspy and crow-like. An apparition forms in the shadows – a tall form with sinister good looks. A black patch covers one eye and a rattlesnake tattoo curls around his right wrist and onto the back of his hand. “Welcome,” he breaths, and the stench of his fetid breath churns my stomach.

 A novel near his shoulder slides half-way out of the shelf. “Take it,” he croaks.

 The title jumps out at me; You Don’t Scare Me by John Farris. I feel a faint bit of courage well up within. “No. I will not.”

Slowly, his claw-like hand reaches up to take hold of the patch over his eye. He rips it off to reveal a smoldering eye with a lightning bolt where a pupil should be. An involuntary gasp escapes my lips. 

Again the title calls to me, “Be brave.” It dares me to stand up to the evil force that’s sucking me into its darkness. I mustered all the courage I can. My sweaty palms clench into fists. The back of my neck stiffens and my face flushes hot. I will not let this entity ruin my adventurous day. You don’t scare me was on the tip of my tongue, but what came out was, “You scare the crap out of me!”

I take a step away from him. “This is not the adventure I had planned and I will not let you pull me into your vile world!”

At that moment a delicate, shimmering blue light illuminates the path as another novel slides from its place on a shelf near my feet. I pick it up. Kissed by Shadows, by Jane Feather, reads the cover. A calm sweeps over me, replacing the jitters Farris had caused. “Now, this is more like it.”

The darkness fades and takes the apparition with it. I flip open the cover of Kissed by Shadows and read the promise of sizzling seduction, dangerous intrigue and passionate adventure. Heat rises in my throat and quickly spreads the blush to my cheeks. “Oh, my.”

Miss Feather, while I’m sure this in an intriguing tale and while I am sorely tempted, I'll pass. Otherwise I will need to take a cold plunge into the waters of repentance in order to wash away guilt from my seared conscience. I re-shelve the novel and push on.

Sunlight breaks at the end of the tunnel where large picture windows open onto the desert landscaping. A peacock struts regally through the shade of ironwood trees. It stops, turns and looks directly into my eyes. It fans its tail into a brilliant display of shimmering emerald and cobalt.

The glass between us begins to waver and swirl into a pulsating circle, “Come,” beckons the peacock. With heart pounding, I step through the portal, feeling a bit like Alice stepping through the looking glass. I know not where this might lead, but if it was adventure I’d wanted, it was adventure I’m getting.

The scene before me morphs into color and warmth, light and melody. A breeze caresses me as my feet leave the ground. I am in flight, soaring over vast valleys and mammoth mountain ranges. Beyond them, a lush forest spreads before me and when I reach the edge of the forest a small village nestled beside the waters of a wide, but gently-flowing river appears. Thatched-roofed houses and green pastures come into view. Flower gardens dot the landscape, boasting a patchwork of various colors.

 As I descend, a marketplace comes into view. People are bustling…no, rushing…no, fleeing from some unknown disturbance in the middle of the town square. As well as I can calculate, the trajectory of my decent will put me smack dab in the middle of the melee.

I don’t know what’s next and I momentarily question my desire for adventure, but whatever lies ahead, I’m sure it beats sitting at home wishing I had something fun to do, so bring it on! 

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3 Acts 9 Blocks 27 Chapters - How to Outline Your Novel

I just watched a fantastic video by Katytastic, explaining how to outline a novel, step-by-step.  This is an easy to understand process for someone who writes by the seat of their pants (a pantser), like me.

I can't tell you how many books I've started, but somewhere between the 4-7th chapter, I get stuck. I don't know where to go next. I've finally realized that I need a road map that points me in the right direction, so when I found this video, I watched it, then watched it again, taking down notes almost verbatim and printed it out so that I can use it for all future novels.

Here's the video.  I hope you enjoy it as much as I did.


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I am not a novelist!

 Okay, it's official (sort of) I am not a novelist.

For the past couple of years, I've been obsessed with writing fiction. Obsessed in that I think about it all the time, study the craft, start novels only to stall in the first several chapters. I have lots a few good story ideas and have about 10 novels started. No kidding - 10.

Why do I want to write a novel?
  1. I love reading good fiction
  2. When I read them, I think...I could probably do that
  3. I got this warped idea that if I write fiction, rather than non-fiction, I will be considered a real writer.
 I've prayed about it (more like begged God to give me a good idea and help me write the book), but keep hitting a wall each time I sit down at the computer.

No, that's not true. I hit the wall when I try to work on a novel, not when I sit down at the computer. You see, I'm a blogger...make that an avid blogger (7 active blogs right now, plus a web site or two, as well as maintaining a blog for the writing group I belong to and contributing to a blog for my local Christian book store), so I am writing...just not fiction.

What do I enjoy writing? Blog posts.
What do I love writing? Devotionals

So why am I making myself miserable trying to write a novel? (Because I really think I can do it...and will do it...someday, but not right now.)  For now I'm going to focus on something that's been on my heart for a while.  I'm going to write a devotional book for my family (and anyone else who wants to read it). I'm not getting any younger and my grandsons are getting older. As much as I want to be around to see them graduated, married and raising a family of their own, I don't know if I will be able to.

There's so much I want to tell them about God and life and how He makes it all worth while. About how to face the trials of life with His help. About stepping into their God-given purpose in life. I want them to have a book they can carry though life to let them know how much God loves them and how much their Grandma loved God.

Some may think this is morbid - writing a book for after you're dead, but not me. It's my legacy.

I'm praying that God inspires my writing, because He knows what they will need in the future. Feel free to pray along with me.

Perhaps devotionals were what I was mean to write all along. My first 2 books were devotionals, 2 of my blogs are devotionals and it's what seems to flow from my spirit to the keyboard. Perhaps being a real writer means writing what you are called to write.

I'll just keep enjoying the work of all those who are called to tell God's story through fiction. You're amazing writers!

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Book Review – Prairie Song – Hearts Seeking Home, Book 1, by Mona Hodgson



I’ve often wondered what life must have been like for people who traveled in a wagon train headed west. I don’t have to wonder anymore, because Mona Hodgson has given me a glimpse into the lives of those brave pioneers. Folks filled with regret for the family, friends and possessions they were leaving behind, overshadowed by an excited hope for their future – the promise of a new beginning out West.

Prairie Song lets us walk the trail along with young Anna Goben, who is hoping that the Promised Land of Californian will be just what it takes to pull her mother and grandfather from their grief over the loss of Anna’s brother. Anna is gutsy and determined to keep her mother’s secret while doing her best to keep her sober and help her grandfather regain his zest for life.  She’s just as determined to squelch her growing interest in trail hand, Caleb Reger.

Caleb clashes with that feisty little redhead, Anna Goben before they ever hit the trail. She’s independent, beautiful, and trouble as far as he’s concerned. Besides, Caleb has other things on his mind. Like Jonah from the Bible, he’s running from God’s calling on his life and his past failures. He’s hoping that five long hard months on the trail just might help him outrun his past.

But God has his own plans for Caleb and Anna. This adventure will take the though trials, tragedy and the discovery that God’s plans truly do include a hope for the future that neither of them ever dreamed of.

Visit the author online www.monahodgson.com
Pre-order Prairie Song - Release date - August 6th, 2013


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A Great Start to a New Year

2013 is off to a great start!

So far, I've...
  • Taken off 5 pounds
  • Dropped my sugar levels by 50 points
  • Spent some wonderful mornings with God and my Jesus Calling devotional
  • Started a new blog
That last one, started a new blog - I needed another blog like I need a hole in the head, but that's what I love to do - create new blogs with new looks and fun new concepts. So when a friend asked if I knew of any free ebooks that she might like to read, I did a little research and was shocked to see how many Christian authors have books that are free in Kindle and/or Nook versions right now.


That got my blogging wheels turning. What if there was a blog that let everyone know about these incredible books, and My Fiction Fix was born.

If any of my author friends would like for me to feature your fiction book, just drop me a note. I'm open to guest blogs by you, the author and your book doesn't have to be free.

So, how's your New Year shaping up?

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A Little Face to Face Conversation

A couple of years ago I entered a writing challenge - write a short story using the following prompt: Face to Face Conversation.

If I remember correctly, I placed in the top 3 in my level (intermediate). Just re-read it this evening and thought..."Did I write that?" It encouraged me to start writing in the Faithwriters weekly challenges again.  Here's the story...

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The day had started off well enough, except for the fact that I had to leave early and missed my quiet time with God. I made a mental note to spend time in the Word and prayer later in the day.

It was a typical Monday at work. I suspect there are pesky demons who slither into office buildings on the weekend to hide important documents and put hexes on computers and various other office machines. By 10:15 this morning Mr. Richardson was demanding the marketing report, which my computer refused to print. The coffee machine had dispensed a cup of coffee – minus the cup. Even Sharla, who worked at the next desk and was usually in a great mood was being a pain.

My daughter's school called at 2:00 o'clock.

“Mrs. Baker, your daughter has skipped her last two classes and was found smoking in the restroom. She's been suspended, please come right away to pick her up.”

That went over big with Richardson.

“Lydia, I can't have a marketing director who isn't committed to her job.”

Being a single mom sucks!

The drive home with a sulking teenager was the highlight of my day...at least it was quiet.

She stomped off to her room and slammed the door to let me know just how angry she was. Believe me, I felt like slamming a few doors myself. Instead, I walked to my room and plopped into the chair where I usually spend the mornings with God.

“Where are you?” I whispered.

I swallowed hard at the lump in my throat, then closed my eyes and allowed my mind to review all the things that were wrong with my life. It seemed that struggle filled every nook and cranny of my existence. The tears came, unbidden and my spirit began a slow descent.

I was all too familiar with depression. It had become a close companion over the last couple of years since my divorce, but several weeks ago, the ladies in my small group had prayed for me and I had actually felt it lift. Each day that followed was a little brighter than the last and I had thought that maybe...perhaps, the depression was gone for good.

Now, I felt it creeping its way back into my heart.

I reached for my Bible and opened it, praying that I would find something to hold onto, something to keep me from slipping back into the darkness.

I let my Bible fall open and began to read Psalms 43. When I reached the 5th verse, my heart did a little flip-flop.

“Why are you downcast, O my soul? Why so disturbed within me? Put your hope in God, for I will yet praise him, my Savior and my God.”

I read it several times. The Psalmist was talking to himself!

I got up and marched myself into the bathroom, flipped on the light and had a little face-to-face conversation with the gal in the mirror.

“Now, you look here, Lydia Baker – I will not tolerate this moping around. God is still on the throne and He is still in control. You are not walking through this world alone. You are walking hand-in-hand with your Savior, Jesus Christ and there is nothing in this life that He can not see you through. You are blessed beyond measure and have much to rejoice about, so shake this off and begin to praise God.”

And I did...right there in the bathroom, staring myself in the eye, I raised my hands and began to praise God for all the good things in my life. I sang, I prayed, I proclaimed my love for the One who gives me every reason to hope.

I only stopped when I saw my daughter standing in the doorway.

“Have you lost your mind?” she asked.

I slipped my arm through hers and smiled.

“Nope! I just renewed it.” I said. “Let's talk.”


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(Copyright© 2012 Jan Christiansen. All rights reserved.)

Start your novel off with a BANG!

I read a great post on Seekerville yesterday by Mary Connealy about where to begin your novel.

Since I struggled so much with NaNoWriMo this year, I was about to give up on the idea of writing fiction, but this post made me want to try again.

Believe me, Mary Connealy  knows how to explot a book onto the page from the get-go. The first book I read by Mary was Petticoat Ranch, which opens with A man plunging over a creek bank riding his horse at full speed on a pitch black stormy night, with a woman and her three little girls trying to save him from the raging waters of a creek.

It was an Indiana Jones, edge-of-your-seat opening. Was I hooked? You bet I was!

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A Merry Little Christmas - Book Review

Sigh….

That’s the first response I have after reading A Merry Little Christmas.

A sigh for the end of a perfect love story…
a sigh for mended relationships, for justice and for living your dreams…
and finally, a sigh that I blew through this book too fast and now I have to wait until Anita Higman dreams up another fantastic book for me to read!

The back cover of this book says that it’s “a cozy holiday read” and that’s just how I feel, cozy and content. If you’re looking for the perfect Christmas gift for your reading friends, you can’t go wrong with A Merry Little Christmas.

The characters are lovable and laughable and I would love to have folks like them for my neighbors and friends. The author even makes shoveling hog manure sound like a most honorable activity!

Join Franny Martin, an adorable and feisty farm girl and Charlie Landau, a handsome and wealthy city boy as they fall in love and overcome all obstacles to be together.

And Ms. Higman…please, please get busy on that next best-seller!

You can pick up your copy of A Merry Little Christmas here  and don’t forget to pick up a few for your friends!



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Destined for Love (1000 word story challenge)

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Lydia stood at the edge of the creek willing herself to look away from the preacher’s bare back, but her gaze remained locked.

Only her older brother’s voice broke the spell.

“Joshua, you get yourself decent, there’s a lady present.” Frank said.
Lydia felt the heat creep up her neck and spread across her cheeks as she whirled around to put the scene behind her.

Frank and Joshua had been friends for as long as Lydia could remember and Lydia had been in love with Joshua for just about as long…though she’d never admitted that to a living soul.
“Just coolin’ off a bit,” laughed Joshua as he made his way to shore in his water logged trousers. He slipped into his shirt and pulled on his boots. “You can turn around now, Miss Lydia. I’m decent.”

Lydia wanted to sink right down into the muddy banks of Carter’s Creek. She, Frank and Joshua and most of the other kids in town had swam together in that creek many times, but that was years ago - before they had grown up. Still, she didn’t want Joshua to know that the sight had bothered her.
She turned around to face the men, flipping her brown curls in the process. “Decent?” she said, “Joshua, you’ve never been decent a day in your life. Not since you chased me down the street with a garter snake when you were 12. You were a scoundrel then and you’re a scoundrel now.” She put both fists on her hips. “Why, I expect you’ll always be a scoundrel and how you got to be a preacher, I’ll never know.”

Joshua chuckled, “Well, I reckon the good Lord gets a kick out of turnin’ scoundrels into saints, just so it’ll confuse people.”
“A saint? A saint? Why Joshua Daws, if you think you’re a saint…”

Frank stepped between his sister and the preacher.

“Will you two never stop bickering?”
“I will if she will,” Joshua grinned.

Lydia raised her chin and squared her shoulders. “I’m sorry,” She said. “If you will excuse us, Parson Daws, my brother and I were on our way to the mercantile to pick up supplies for Mama.” With that she spun on her heels and marched herself toward town. “Are you coming, Frank?” she threw over her shoulder.
Joshua watched the only girl who’d ever caught his eye walk away. He turned and gave Frank a playful slug in the arm. “My friend, that sister of yours gets prettier every day.”

Frank shook his head. “When are you two going to admit you like each other so you can get on with the task of courtin’? You know you’re going to wind up my brother-in-law sooner or later.”
Joshua turned again to look down the path Lydia had taken. “From your lips to God’s ears, my friend,” he said.


--Several months later--

“I reckon I’ll just have to up and marry you, Miss Lydia,” said Joshua, giving the swing another push.
Lydia squealed. “Joshua Daws, you stop this swing right now!”

“Yes, ma’am,” he said. Stepping in front of the swing, he grabbed both ropes as Lydia swung toward him. The swing jerked to a stop, throwing the pretty girl right into his arms. He pulled her close. “Will you, Lydia?” His voice softened. “Will you marry me?”

Lydia’s heart pounded in her chest, her face felt flush as tried to push him away. “Let me go, Joshua.”
“Never,” said the preacher, tightening his hold.

Lydia looked over her shoulder at her family and friends, gathered on the church grounds for a late summer picnic.
“Let go,” she said, pushing herself out of his embrace. “Someone will see.”

“Don’t bother me, none,” he shrugged. “They know we’ve been courtin’ for a while. I doubt anyone will be surprised when we get married.”
Lydia narrowed her eyes and did her level best to look perturbed. “And just what makes you think I’ll marry you, Parson Daws?”

Joshua reached out and ran his finger down her cheek. “Well,” he said, “because I’ve known from the first time I ever laid eyes on you that you were the girl for me.”
Lydia’s skin tingled where he’d touched her face. “Joshua, don’t be silly. I was only nine years old when we moved to Carter’s Creek and you and Frank became friends.”

“That’s right, and I’ve waited 10 long years for you to grow up so I could make you my wife. Besides that, you've got to admit…you and me would make the cutest babies this side of the Rockies.”
Lydia felt the heat rush to her face again. “You ought to be ashamed of yourself!”

He pulled her back into his arms. “Say I’m wrong, sweetheart. Say you don’t love me. Say you don’t want to be my wife and I’ll walk away.”
With that, he dropped down on one knee and shouted loud enough for the whole town to hear, “Lydia Reynolds, will you be my wife?”

“Say yes,” Frank yelled from up on the hill.
“Say yes,” her father shouted from the bench under the oak tree.

“Say yes! Say yes!” came more cries from the crowd.
Joshua looked into her hazel eyes. “Say yes,” he whispered.

Lydia was beat and she knew it. She threw her head back and laughed. “Yes, yes, yes, I will marry you, Parson Daws.”
A cheer rose from the crowd as their friends descended the hill to congratulate them.

Frank got to his sister first and gave her a big hug. “About time,” he said, “What took you so long?”
Lydia gave him a sly grin. “Sometimes you just have to let a feller chase you until you catch him,” she said.

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Loved Montana Rose!

Just finished reading Montana Rose by Mary Connealy. I can't get enough of this gal's writing! 


Montana Rose is my favorite so far. Of course, I say that about whichever of Mary's books I've just read, but honestly. I loved the main characters in this one. Cassie and Red Dawson are wonderfully created and I'll tell you what...if I met a man like Red Dawson, I'd fall head over heals in love with him. (If I weren't already married to the most wonderful man in the world, that is.) 

Do yourself a favor and pick up this book. It's the first in the Montana Marriages series and joy of joys, a little sweetheart named Carol sent me a surprise package, which arrived yesterday and guess what was in it...the next two books in the series - The Husband Tree and Wildflower Bride!

Seems like i'm doing more reading than writing these days (except on my blogs), but that's okay. I call it research. I mean, really...how can you become a good writer unless you read good writing?

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