

As you can see, they're beginning to open nicely...and they smell wonderful!
Want to read the first paragraph of the book? (Remember, this is a first draft, so it might be a little rough and may change later.)
Jill saw the headlights cross the centerline at the exact moment Richard slammed on the brakes. Her own screams mingled with the screeching of the tires and then she felt Richard’s hand on hers. Time stood still for a split second. It seemed eerily quiet inside the car. Richard and Jill's eyes locked and said in that moment, everything there wasn’t time to say aloud. Then the semi truck slammed into them.
Haha - it's hard to tell from that first paragraph, but this really is a love story - just had to grab your attention from the very start.
Until tomorrow...
Current Word Count 1560
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(Copyright © 2009 Jan Christiansen. All rights reserved.)
Consider my attention thoroughly grabbed!
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